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Kel's short story, "Kiss This"

 
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Kel writes.
Woah! She does? That's so cool!
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Yeah, she's good at it, too.
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...she should stop.
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*GASP* I love you!
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[Kel the Slayer]
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 6:22 pm    Post subject: Kel's short story, "Kiss This" Reply with quote

Yeah, I was kinda mad, and a lil jealous, and I just started writing, and this is how it turned out. A few of my friends were all, "Kel, you're so cool! It's so good!" Feel free to comment, I like hearing what people do and don't like, ok?
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“You,” she said, lowering her gun, “Why do you do this to me? Why do you haunt me so…?”
He smiled and said, “I do this because you deserve it.”
He began to walk towards her, slowly, and tears ran down her cheeks. As he advanced, she stepped back, until she could walk backwards no longer, backing against the mausoleum. He gently put a hand on her shoulder, and she flinched, her blue eyes narrowed in fear.
“You’re scared of me now?” he asked, a hint of satisfaction in his smooth voice.
She said nothing as she pushed her gun up against his stomach.
“Go ahead; pull it.” He mocked, “You don’t have the guts! Only when your little friend is around you’re gutsy, but when he’s not you’re just a timid punk.”
She closed her eyes tight; she knew he was right. She couldn’t pull the trigger and end him; not him, her ex lover. She whimpered slowly put her hands back down, still holding onto the gun tightly.
He let out a cold chuckle, “I knew it; you’re just a gutless !@#$. That’s all you ever were.” He smacked her across the face with his pistol and she fell to the ground. “Oh, come now, I didn’t hit you that hard! Get up!” He kicked her side and she screamed in pain. “Get up so I don’t feel bad when I kill you.”
“Did you feel bad when you shot him in the back, you piece of !@#$?” she growled, standing to face him again.
“Isabelle; it felt good just wrapping my finger around the trigger and pointing the gun at that fool.” he taunted as he moved her wavy brown bangs from her eye.
She drew back from him, falling backwards into a tombstone. Isabelle grunted through clenched teeth as a wave of pain went through her back.
He smiled and said, “How pathetic. You can’t even stay on your feet anymore. You really do deserve to die, just like him.” He raised his gun slowly, aiming for her face.
She closed her eyes and dropped her weapon, “I’m sorry, Darien… I screwed up, and you didn’t deserve it, but nobody deserves death for a kiss. That’s all we ever did, and the one you saw was the first.”
“!@#$,” Darien growled, menace thick in his voice, “You’ve been ‘friends’ for years, so you can’t tell me you’ve only kissed him once. You can’t tell me you haven’t made out with him, slept with him!”
Isabelle shook her head, “No… He said he had to at least kiss me before he lost me forever.”
Darien hesitated for a moment, “Isabelle… kiss this.” He pulled the trigger, and her face was ripped almost in two; blood and tissue flying everywhere.
He put the gun back in his jacket, and slowly walked off, leaving his dead fiancé splattered over her friend’s grave.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 6:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

now thats a good story. Awesome! but i feel sad for that girl.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 6:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whee~! But the question you have to ask yourself is this: was Isabelle lying? Do you believe her...?
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 3:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hmm....who knows? i think i'll go for...believing(excuse my spelling) her.

can you post more up?

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 11:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Correctamundo! She was tellin the truth. ...and she died for it. Sadly, there is no more of this story; it's a very short one. But, I guess I could turn it into a longer story...maybeh a prequil...That's not gonna happen anytime soon, though, because I'm on a roll with another story! I've got maybe 2 chapters done and Tracy & Paul have been giving me death threats if I don't write more. ^_^; Tracy says my stories are like crack, and I'll believe it. Maybe I'll post it, but there's a lot of "foul language" and "adult situations" in it...yeah...that's an e-mail story.

Oh! And about Zellohs. I dunno where he is exactly, but I know he's in storage. When ever it is that I move and find him again, I'mma continue! I liked that story, and I was pissed when I lost it.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 11:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

oh well, thats my lost. can you post up those stories anyway? i doubt reppy will lock them or anything.
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 1:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok~! Right now I only have a couple chapters of Dies, and technically Chappy 2's not done yet. I still have to look it over for errors.
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