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[hex]

Hey guys, I drew this a while back - what do ya all think? Id like loads of constuctive criticism so i can improve it please! And before anyone says it, yes, i know there is no detail in the ear!



Thanks!
hex

[Gawl64]

Not bad at all! I like yur style, but yu told me to criticise yu so, here goes:
The nose is too pointy! Dull it down!!

Hope thats enuff fer yu.

[Z]

aye it's cute. ^_^ you did an excellent job coloring (something I really need to learn how to do..)

but I don't think you need to make the nose so pointy. It'd only be like that if the head was at an angle. So mayhaps if it were a bit straighter. Eeep I'm not saying to make it a completely straight line.. just straghter.


the eyes are beautiful. o_o

[Saitou_Hajime]

there's NO detail in the EAR!... bah!

[Himura Kenshin]

If This is your imagination you are an artist

[hex]

Thaks everyone! Ill go and play about with the nose...... ill also put some detail in the ear!

hex

[fairyvamp14]

ok definatly work on the nose, but the face shape is also bothreing me... ur shading could deffinaly use some work and there should be white sround the eye, idk about u... but MY skin doesn't connect to my pupil... the shape of the ear could stand to be changed, it should be more like a question mark than a rectangle, the hair behind the head is pretty good, but on top and by the eyes it's just to randm and short up there, also the bangs are to thick and i don't rele see any eyebrows. the mouth is a little high up, but the face shape doesn't leave much room for it, once u fix that it should be easy to move it down, not a lot, just a bit. one more thing... >.< is it a boy or girl? cuz if it's a girl then u might want to make the eyelashes angle up at the corner of her eye, and u might want to make her eye not droop so much... ok i'm done, hope it helps

[DotHack017]

Well i like it So much better then mine my first one was a Stick figure with a giant head and some crappy stick eyes lol iv got some what better i actully draw bodys now and i drew a picture of shugo but i dont know how to get it on computer to post it

[Etrruugo]

bump the thread up.


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