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[knives]

well im not that good but here it goes

Spike: God damn why cant we ever catch anyone worth a damn thing. All we ever catch is lowlife wierdos that arnt worth enough to even get the bebop painted.

Faye: O shut up at least you get to get off this damn thing ive been stuck on this thing for two weeks with that ::points to ed running around in circles with a vase stuck on her head::.

Jet: ::looking on the comp with a grin:: here we go vash the stampede. 60 billion double dollers. sound like a lot im sure we can get it exchanged.

Faye:Vash hu..... I cant help thinking ive heard that name before. O well lets go. you can catch him right spike. :: looks over at spike sleeping on the couch drooling with ein on top of him:: AHHHH that lazy bum we finally get a chance to make some real cash and we drools on the couch.

the rest of the voyage to where vash's last sighting was had ed mimicking faye stomping around the room which did not improve her mood at all.

CH.2

Jet: hey wake up where here. :: looks around and everyones gone with spike out already looking for vash, ed rading the almost empty pantry, and faye looking for a fight already in a terrible mood::

spike: hu.... this planet is totaly baren. Theres a small city up ahead i guess ill go look there(if nothing else at least a beer)



Vash: Oh come on guys i havent done anything bad for a week cant i please go.

meral: NOOOOOOOOO! :: Pulling vash back with all her strength::

Vash: please all i want is one beer. pleaseeeeeeeeeee.

mili: O mr.vash cheer up. all we need is five more days and then the report will be done and you can cuase all the damage you want

Vash:but: very attractive woman walks by:: um hup two hup two comeon we dont have all day report back to base:: stomps off in an overly dramatic military fashion twards the lady::

Merel: i swear hes like a baby he'll want to go to a toy store until you put a piece of candy in front of him and then he'll cry for that until he gets it. ughhhhhhhhh common Mili lets go make sure he doesnt get into any more trouble i dont fell like trailing that baffon for another three months,

Mili: ::in a sweet as ever non caring voice:: coming

ch.3 to be continued

[Drakkon]

Cool, its good so far, cant wait to see the next chp.s.

[knives]

CH.3

vash catches up to the lady at a dinner near the bar spike is visiting.

Vash: Has anyone seen him? No? O well ill catch him next time he probably ran off scared again. :: looks at faye the woman he was following:: well hello there I didn't see you even though with your radient beauty that seems impossible. You see I was just chasing a convicted fellon but buying you a drink seeems much more important right now. How about it?

Faye: whatever

Vash: alright ::not believing his luck so far:: um.... bartender two off your finest drinks :: leans closer to bartender checking his pockets:: um actually make that two of the cheapest.

suddenly many things happen at once. First everyone ducks at a spray of bullets shot through the dinner. Second vash is already halfway through the window trying to find a place to hide guessing the shooters arnt looking for a free meal. And third spike comes running out the bar
towards the dinner.

Faye: ::pulls out gun and shoots one of the men outside ::

Spike: Ow! God damn it Faye you grazed my shoulder.

Faye: Opps sorry:: gets up out of the dust coughing:: what happened?

suddenly they hear a loud crash outside and both Faye and Spike run around the building to where the noise came from. They find a man in a red coat stuck in a barrel of fish.

Vash: O man this milli just cleaned this thing for me too.

Spike: who are you.

Vash: :: stands up proudly and poughs out chest:: I am the elusive butterfly among fields of grass. I am the Mayfly of love. And uh ya but anyway :: luaghs nonchalont:: I got to go no see ya:: runs away at an amazing speed leaving faye and Spike in an openmouthed guesture::

Spike: the hell?

Man from behind: Hey where did he go?You::points a Spike:: Where did he go?which way did Vash the stampede go?

Spike: Your kidding me that was vash the stampede.

other man beside him: Yup.

First man: Me and my band have been after him for a month but he always slips away Its like trying to cup water in youre hands. O by the way Im erics and this is ::points to each man in turn:: Andy:: Spike grimaces having met this one before::Steve, and Mary.

Spike: right whatever well im after him too.

Andy: O ya just like you where after teddy bomber.::sniggers slightly::

Spike: o shut up i would have couaght him if it wasnt for you.
anyway we gotta get going we'll see you later.

CH.4 to be countinued. :: After soccer game::

[Drakkon]

Its good so far, ::tries to predict what will happen next::

[knives]

CH.4

Vash: Are they gone yet?

A bang behind him and three bullets whizz by.

Vash:nope::keeps running::

Spike: Damn hes fast.

Faye: ya well the fast ones are always the idiots::fires gun one last time in vashes direction:: o well lets head back where not going to catch him like this.

Erics,Andy,steve, and mary run past.

Andy:see ya spike.

Spike: common were gonna catch him. iv gotta plan.

Faye: ::sighs:: Just give it up your not much smarter than him you know.

vash running wildly slams straight into milli.

Milli: Well hello Mr. Vash.

Meral: Not getting into any trouble i hope.

Vash: Who me of course not you know me. :: smiles and walks away fast::

Milli: I wonder why Hes on such a hurry.

Meral: Why do you think he probably blew up a bar.

Bartender: DId you see man in a red coat he just totally destroyed my bar and ran.

Meral+Milli: ::sigh::

Ch.5

Spike: hes gotta be around here some where.

spike and Faye where hiding on top of a rough.

Faye: Oh just give it up this plan will never work.

Spike: What are you talking about of course it will. Shhh Here he comes.

Vash comes running towards the spot where Faye and Spike are hidden trying to run away from the bartender and spots a free beer sign.

Vash: Ah this looks like a good place to hide::walks inside.

Vash: Wo its totaly barren. Hello......... Anyone here.

Three things happen at once.
first the front door crashes in and there are two men standing there.
Second the back door crashes in and there is a man and a woman standing there. And third part of the roof crashes in and Faye and Spike are standing there.

Vash: Hey youre the lady from the bar arnt you.

Faye: arnt you observant.

Spike: See i told you it would work :: And then sneers at andy::

Vash: Wo we havin a party common put those guns down its free beer.

Spike: You idiot it was a trap.

Vash: oreally well thats to bad but I really have to go now.

Andy: Youre not going anywhere. ::starts to pull back trigger::

before andy is even half way through pulling it everyones gun falls apart except Fayes. Vash is standing in front of everyone with a smokeing pistole.

Vash: I would have shot youres too(talking to faye) But yourse was unloaded so I just put a cork in it.

Faye:hu :: tries to pull the cork out of her gun but its stuck::

Vash: :: holds up a bottle of beer:: Hey looks like theres some beer afterall. But really can i go now.

Andy: bu b b bu but...How did you? :: drops remnats of gun and runs away.

steve follows suit.

Spike: O common is that all you got. :: challenges Vash to fisty cuffs and goes at it for a while then stops relizing vash was winning without even trying:: You move so fast. How?

Vash: O just luck i guess.

Mary:(shouting) O its not luck youre the legendary sluaghterer Vash the stampede.

Vash: o no you got it all worng You see I dont kill. I

Mary interupts vash in now a screaming voice: Yes you are a sluaghterer. My parents and brother and sister lived in July city You killed them both.

Vash: (wide eyed) But..But no one was in july city when i blew it up.

Spike: You blew up a city?

Mary: ::Ignoring Spike:: Yes but when July fell so did its econemy and everyone with it. ::said Mary seething::

Vash: Yes. Im sorry ive met one like you before. I....I didnt mean to.

Mary: how could you not mean to? Ill.....Ill kill you :: she jumps at vash and he ducks::

Vash: NO not here.

they all run for a long time until they get to a steep cliff. there was fog all around them.

Vash: ::standing on the edge of the cliff:: Ok lets do this.

Vash and Mary get into an intense fight. Vash barley misses a punch by mary and is leaning on the edge of the cliff. Mary runs up and then freezes. :: She couldnt kill him in cold blood she thought besides that was to good of a punishment for him. mary walked up to drag Vash off the cliff and have everyone pin him down and bring him to jail when a rock slipped beneath Vashes foot. Part of The cliff That Vash was standing on gave way and Vash the stampede legendary gunman plunged into the Fog.

Ch.6

Mary: Noooooooooo..... God damn it no he deserved a worse fate then that.

Erics: ::running over to Mary:: Its alright its over now. Its over.

That night they all sat around the fire with Mary asleep.

Erics: Marys my sister. Im the only family she has left After Vash The stampede blew up July city. I made amens and wanted to start a new life somwhere else but Mary couldn't let go of the rage inside her and Made it her life goal to track down And kill Vash the stampede. So I couldn't abandon her So I put together A party :f course losing some and gaing some along the way with a bad apple here or there:: And helped her find Vash The stampede. O well I think Me and Mary can finally live in peace now. :: with that he he looked up at the sky fell backwards and whent to sleep.

The next moring Spike and Faye saw Erics And Mary off.

Mary: thanks for everything.

SPike:yay bye.

Faye: ::Walks up to mary as shes boarding a train:: Never hold on to regret or hate. Its the worst thing that can happen.

Mary nodded and left. Spike stares at Faye oddly. He had never seen Her look so grim.A few seconds later Mary and Erics where gone.

Spike: Well better go get Vash.

Faye: What the hell are you talking about.

Spike: ::walking back Towards the cliff:: common.

When they reach the cliff Spike sticks his hand down where Vash had fallen. A gloved hand grabbed his and Spike pulls up Vash.

Vash: Whew Thanks Man my arms soar from having to hang on to a jutting out rock all that time. howd you know i was down there?

Spike: When you fell you just fell staright and fell right down you didnt fall backwards like somone would if they unintentionaly fell off a cliff.

Faye: Hey wait Now i remember where ive seen you before. Ive been to this planet before and played cards with you. when i had won twelve rounds you said you had to go to the bathroom And i never saw you again.

Vash: well nice meeting You thanks for everything bye ::runs off at lighting speed::

Faye: ::starting to run after Vash::

Spike: dont bother thats one guy youll never make any money off of.

back at the abandoned bar where Spike had planned the trap.

Andy: ::poking his head out of a fish barrel he was hiding in:: Do d d do you think hes gone?

Steve: :: poking his head out of a fish barrel right by andys:: I dont know.

A young boy fires a cap gun and they both duck thier heads back into the fish.

The end

[Drakkon]

Cool, I like it a lot. Are you going to have a #2??

[knives]

[Drakkon]

Sorry, I was practicing for typing class so I forgot there was a backspace Sorry, but I changed it

[knives]

i doubt it that one just kinda came out of me that is how i write most of my stories (that one definatly not being my best one.)

[Edward]

Sounds really good so far..and you said it wouldn't be that great...yeah ok!

[irken33]

that was very good i cant right stories for crap so your much beter then me.

[Drakkon]

I can write really good stories but dont have the time or paitents to write them on the cpu. Maybe I will get around to it

[Aznbballer888]

[FLCLmonkey22]

very goood very good

[sensei1809]

then let see one